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My main character is working against all odds trying to achieve her dream. I am trying to show her determination even though she knows that she will not be chosen. Just like this picture my character is fighting an uphill battle. And the rock signifies how much of a lead her friend has over her.   

The city it self isn't what I am bringing to life. I am trying to expose the corruption and poverty Indonesia shows in the 1960. Even though Indonesia is industrialized it is still far behind the rest of the world.   

The main conflict I am talking about is how corrupt politics are. I am trying to show how an average person gets cheated out. When you look at the person who won and you tell them you cheated your going to get a reaction, but when you get the story from a the person who lost you see the determination they the put out to get what they wanted.

What we should do to make your nonfiction narratives presentable is have one last critique from a group of 5 or 6. When you have a bigger group the points that are repeated tell you what you should fix and when you are told you get a good job on this it tells the author what he should mimic to make his story better. Also, when someone is struggling on a part of his story he can see what other people like an try to structure the story the same way the other person did.